Descriptive writing

WALT: Describe

Can you spot interesting adjectives, similes, metaphors or personification in these great descriptions?

Junk  yard

When I  walk in to  the  junk  yard  I see very old crow’s searching for  worm’s. I can smell rotten cheese from about 20 years ago.

You could hear old rusty diggers working.

My friend and I could feel rotten mud on my shoes with a squeaky noise.

 By Blake

 

When I come back to earth

When I come back down to earth

I see cracked windows from tired building

Falling branches from the creepy trees

Crushed cars, smashed windows

Silent black dark world

Broken buildings

By Sivan

Junk yard 

In a huge junk yard I can smell air that smells like dirty socks. I could feel gross, gooey, stinky and yuck mud on my boots. The tins clang to gather with a loud   noise. My friends and I can see dirty rubbish that stinks.

By Greer